Ugh, this chapter.
There was a lot of future plot things
that I needed to set up in this chapter. And that was the biggest
hurdle I had because I wasn't sure what route I wanted to take.
If you visited my blog over the past year or so- you know I decided to go crazy and write a rough draft of AtO till the final chapter. The draft is terrible and needs ruthless revising and editing but it helped me decide which plot points I liked better.
Speaking of editing, this chapter's
editing was... an experience.
Maybe I was just super out of practice
with editing AtO because it took embarrassingly long to get through
even one page of this chapter.
On top of that I cycled between two
different docs, one that I had written much earlier. So some
conversations that are friendly in the earlier draft is completely
different from what I wrote in the newer version of the chapter.
Having to read through and merge
conversations was tedious but I think overall it came out rather
well. If nothing else, I hope that my writing quality has improved
and is more noticeable.
Now onto chapter specific notes- of
which I don't really have a lot of.