30 May 2012

Uchihas' Gods: Additional scenes

So I was reading the latest Naruto chapter and a part of me just wouldn't settle down until I sat down and added to the original Uchihas' Gods plot bunny somehow.

I admit I had too much fun imagining the following scene(s) actually taking place.

Warnings: Un-edited, Crazy scene shifts, massive plot holes, etc. Super cool HP trio. Uchiha Madara.
Spoilers from Naruto manga chapter 559 onwards.
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Harry stilled. “Did you two feel that?”
Hermione had already gone to the side of their cave.
Ron sat up and closed his eyes in wonder. “What's going on?”
“The barrier,” Hermione whispered in blatant disbelief. “It's gone. We can leave.”
Ron gulped. “That can't be right. We were supposed to be in here till... don't tell me the world is actually ending?” He turned to Harry. “What do we do?”
“Well, if the world is ending, let's go see the outside world one last time,” Harry smiled grimly as he stood up. “It's been a while since I've seen the real sky with my own eyes.”
Ron huffed. “That would be nice.”
“You two,” Hermione said and glanced pointedly at their bare feet, “Aren't you forgetting something?”
“But Hermione, the world is ending,” Ron said, “We don't really need shoes.”
Harry nodded. “I second that.”
Hermione rolled her eyes and muttered underneath her breath.
“Hurry up,” Ron said as he moved to the entrance. “The world's ending. We don't want to miss it.”
Harry snorted but followed after Ron with Hermione by his side.
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“How will you deal with the second one, Onoki?” Madara smirked, confident in his victory as a second meteor raced down.
But just before it could crash against the first, both meteors disintegrated into dust and disappeared completely in the next instant.
Madara glanced down at the battlefield, searching for the ninja who'd countered his technique. He stilled as he caught sight of the ever so familiar figures flitting about the battlefield below. Even though the clothes were different colours, they way the material sparkled in the sunlight was familiar to Madara. “No, it can't be!”
“What is it?” Kabuto's voice asked.
Madara jumped back down onto the battlefield before the cliff. He scoffed at the way the weak ninja, who'd stilled on seeing the three deities, tensed into battle ready positions and moved closer to those three shining forms.
“Who the heck are you people? And what kind of weird clothes are you wearing to a battle?” The blond kid, the one who'd brazenly attacked him before, glanced at the three deities with disbelief. “You don't even have shoes on!”
“Disrespectful brat!” Madara hissed in anger and sent out a wave of fire towards the boy. “Know your place.”
But Susanoo, with his kind green eyes, instantly appeared beside the boy. He held up a hand, freezing the flames in mid-air and with a lazy snap of his fingers vanished Madara's attack. With a soft chuckle, Susanoo turned to the blond boy and patted his hair gently.
Madara stilled, feeling acutely betrayed. He turned a little to the side and noted the way Amaterasu and Tsukuyomi knelt by the injured and healed them. The sense of betrayal grew deeper. Why were the gods not siding with him? Why weren't they helping him?
Madara held his breath as Susanoo appeared directly in front of him. After an odd searching glance, Susanoo dragged his fingers through the air. A globe of water poured itself into a metal cup that had appeared out of nowhere.
Madara stared at the cup, slightly overwhelmed at being remembered and recognized after so many years. He ignored the whispers of “Whose side are they on?” “What's happening?” “Why isn't he attacking them? Do they know each other?” around him and tentatively took the cup, feeling like he was six all over again.
Susanoo grinned and looked around with obvious curiosity.
“Susanoo,” Madara said almost reverently as he tightened his fingers around the cup, “Why...”
Susanoo turned to him, his bright green eyes assessing as he stepped closer to Madara.
“Ah! Don't go so close to him!” the blond boy shouted from his spot.
Madara snorted, eager to send another flame attack at the impudent boy, but he stayed still and kept his eyes on Susanoo.
Susanoo stopped a few inches away, raised his hand and patted Madara's chest armour with a thoughtful expression.
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Harry sighed as he patted the red chest armour and sorted through what his magic has sensed. He glanced back at Ron and Hermione. “There's no doubt. This is the kid who came broke through the barrier and entered our cave years ago.”
“Well, he certainly looks good for his age,” Ron said.
Hermione twitched and smacked the back of his head. “He obviously not completely alive, you idiot.”
Ron hummed thoughtfully as he patted the leg he'd finished healing. With a sigh, he stood up and looked around. “Since he's the one attacking these people... he's a part of this war.”
“He's one side of this war,” Hermione said. “Considering we saved his life all those years ago, doesn't that mean we've indirectly caused this? And since the barrier that was imprisoning us was supposed to disappear only when the world was ending, doesn't that mean..."
Harry stilled and said, "We've indirectly brought about the end of the world again!"
Ron groaned. "Why does this always happen to us? We were imprisoned and everything. How did we manage this?"
“Even if we save the world now,” Hermione said, ignoring them easily, as she finished healing another person. “We'll probably just be punished even more harshly.”
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Glad to get that craziness out of my system.

But hmm, I wonder why this persistent nagging to write things never happens with AtO. Why is it only the crazy plot bunnies that make me sit and write continuously without getting distracted? 

Psh, at least I'm making my chapter 14 plot list even with all the distractions around me.

Polar
P.S. Reviews for chapter 13 are making me laugh in triumph. Because I know I'll be able to surprise you with certain things in the future.

12 comments:

  1. Silent ReaderMay 30, 2012

    It's 5A.M. and I'm up for some reason, totally opened this blog at random and HEY! a new post!
    Even though i'm not following the manga, I'm still having fun with these ideas.

    At least the whole Golden Trio was sealed and not just Harry like in those Harry-goes-to-Azkaban-and-becomes-more-hyphenated-by-finding-his-long-lost-lineage-or-is-depressed-and-turns-dark fics.

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  2. AnonymousJune 01, 2012

    I actually like it i hope you can continue writing it even if its snippets like this. Its just such an original story.

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  3.  Well if I ever get inspired to write out about this AU-verse, I'll definitely write it out.

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  4. Ohh, Harry getting all hyphenated (that sounds weird)- I actually used to read those dark Harry fics ages ago. They were fun until I realized that there was no super awesome HP Gryffindor trio. I immediately remedied that. Found some dark Gryffindor trio fics and never looked back. =D

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  5. Little KajuuJune 11, 2012

    "Dark Gryffindor trio fics?" *Makes grabby hands* I hate the angst and betrayal genres coupled together, quite like them on their own but both is just too much on my tear ducts it seems. If you have any links to hand I would very much appreciate it~

    This AU verse is fantastic, I want to see language barriers and bumbling and curiosity and so, so much more. Introducing the trio to the wider world might break it but oh, it would be sooo much fun to watch...

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  6. romantiscueJune 14, 2012

    Just popped by to say that this idea is very original and interesting, and that I hope this crazy bunny makes you write some more ;) I love the misunderstanding (if it can be called that, since the trio is, while not gods, at least extremely old and powerful), the different POVs (what a human Madara you've portrayed!), and the general shenanigans going on. The end of the world, indeed XD

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  7. FanficreadherJune 18, 2012

    I hope you can post some links of the dirk trio fanfics that would be an interesting read hahaha

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  8.  Will look through my list and see what I can. Might take a while though, since I'm pretty sure none of those stories have updated in a while- so I can't really remember their names at the moment.

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  9. Always good to know my random craziness is appreciated. Hmm, human-Madara... looks like I need to work on writing 'crazy/psycho/battle-hungry' characters so that they're not so out of character. =D

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  10. I'll definitely look through my list of story alerts and see where all those dark Gryffindor trio have disappeared to- they haven't updates in ages.

    Hmm, well even if the trio was introduced to the wider world, they'd eventually find a way to escape and find their privacy. Of course, that doesn't mean their crazy Uchiha devotee will just let them go... as for language barrier, I imagine that even if they didn't bother to learn the language of the world, they'd communicate via images through magic (which would make certain Uchiha even more in awe, probably). Gosh, this is such a distracting train of thought, because a plot bunny just popped up...

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  11. But it would be hilarious to read lol :D

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  12. Hmm, maybe they can seal the place, let everyone kill each other but not let them die until they wear themselves out enough to negotiate. :D

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